You're a terrific writer
your writing seems so heartfelt and sincere.
i'm adding you to my favourites, and look forward to you submitting more poems!
I'm eagre to go read the rest of your work.

I loved the last line, "faithfully placing her heart in his hands, she submits to a chance of love". That's exactly what love it. Having faith. You gotta have faith.
good job! you're great. keep it up.