Comments : Christmas fun

  • 17 years ago

    by Mel

    This was so cute!
    i loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ankit V Master

    Excellent poem...u have this art of creating pictures with ur words...

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Indeed a very sweet poem

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Krazy

    Loved the rhyming. details were very well written. nice word choice. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    This was so cute, i love the feeling of christmas, everyone is always happy and there's never any arguments in my household on the actual day =)
    Beautiful
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The imagery in this poem was nicely written. It seemed so cute and sweet. I loved the flow. Well done on how you portrayed this poem. It was written nicely.~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very Cute!! I absolutly love Christmas! It's my all time favorite holiday but the best part has got to be the snow. And reading this poem made me feel the anticipation of awaiting snowfall on Christmas morning! lovely write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    On the fifth line
    Theres a question mark at the beginning.
    I don't think it's supposed to be there.
    It seems like a regular Chrismas thing.
    Nothing really caught my eye.
    All in all
    I give it a 5/5 :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. Maybe the only change I would think you should make is you might try spliting the stanza into two or more smaller ones. 5/5