Shoot, damn you're fricken how old and you speak more truth than those much older than yourself? More truth than those who claim to know the words of a poet. Talent comes in such a young package

Wow, been waiting for a poem like this for awhile. I agree with raodandthe radio, your wisdom surpases many peopl your age. I just have to say great poem and I would like to read more of your poems.

Bonnie
Congrats on winning the readers choice of the day :)
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Your truly great poet
It's all so true
to many girls change themselves to fit into society when remember we shouldn't care what people think graet poem keep it up !
lol
luv ya
-Andrea!

Each must make their own way in life. You learn life as you live it. Eventually you find truths that stand the test of time and on your own you make your own decisions that inevitably cause you to take a honest look at things. It is then as you have stated in your poem that you return to some truths because to you they are still true.

I LOVE IT && i love the dedication ="[ it brings a wee tear to my eye...i didn knO yoO could write like this!! its the most butifuLL thing ive evr read!!!

Keep up the good work. You are one of my favourite writers.

This is so true you commented my poem its the first one of mine on here so far but there'll be more like this well done for bringing it 2 peoples attention people dont realise its wrong !..take care..

Good work- age really doesnt matter, its your intelligence. Thanx for commenting on ma poem. keep the good work goin...

Your words speak the truth.If one celeb. would stop and say hey lets eat some real food ,we would strive.get work by the way.

sabrina

I liked that, not alot of ppl write something like that i really liked it it was different while i read it i try to anylize it...
but it has so many meanings to it ,
5/5

Wow i really liked this it had a strong mesage behind it....
wat, well sort incouraged you to write it about this particular topic??

This is amazing. I love it. Its very well written, and sad. thanks for the comment.

This is an awesome poem. Great job. thanks for the comment. 5/5
-vino