:(... 5/5... very emotional yaar...
i dont know wat to say!

May god give you the longest life, I wish nothing happen to my Goran, Never.

the poem made me cry and feel so bad.

Interesting rhyme scheme, was intriguing to read. Very emotional, nicely written, 5/5.

Wow. beautiful and so sad goran. this one is truly amazing. i loved the rhythm to it and it flowed beautifully. there is nothing i could say to critcize. keep it up. your an amazing poem. =]

x33Lauren

Hi
oh god...i don't know if i should praise u for this great poem..or scorn u for even thinking of such a thing....i wish nothing hapen to u. and that u may live a very long life and enjoy each moment of it...u deserve the best in this world.....nothing is constant remamber..joy...sorrow...its how u use it , i mean ur life that will always remain....ur a good person..and may god reward u with kindnesss.
take care..and i hope to see more poem by u........
because every single word writen by u...i love it...ur the best...........

Awww that is so cool i like this poem i like the last part that you had in there: Please remember my advices,
Please remember my name.
i like that...5/5

Another great poem. keep up the great work:) 5/5

Great job goran, love the poem, 5/5!!!, we will miss you in the club so come back and visit us sometime.

I liked it g0ran, i really did.. i cant say anym0re.. y0ure w0rk is s0 deep and meaningful and thats exactly what i l0ve ab0ut it... keep writing xox

That was real sad. If I had a message to my loved ones before I die, most of what's on this poem would probably say it all. =( Sad but GREAT! I loved it! And it's awesome how you have your own book published! Awesome!

Another beauuuuuuuuuutiful poem, so sad, so emotional, so wonderful... i love your poems!! another great job by the greatest poem i've read 5/5

Awwww. Very sad and beautiful.
Wonderful for telling someone how you feel and to let them have the best life they can. Wonderful job.
God Bless 5/5

~Tay~

Ah this is so sad...good job though!

Wow this poem really spoke to me....

Whenever you feel down,
Thinking the life is so tough.
Just don't forget,
Someone still loves you,
A dead heart, but for you,
Still full of love.

Perfectly written, how the sad heart still carries that love even til the end. Great job once again! 5/5

Umm.. simply amazing.. i can relate.. and well you just put my thoughts to words thanks for the great poem ^.^ comment back if ya get the chance

Wow... I real am touched

thanks

This is a very good write. i have one of those hearts that carries a alove till the job! very end. Excellent

I hate to say it but it was not as wonderful as I had hoped. Nothing really stuck out in my mind as entirely wrong. It just seemed so drawn out. Please try to make your poetry more enticing. If you don't, you'll find that your poetry is more of a chore than your readers will like.

Sorry for the negativity, just thought I would be honest!

This poem was so exceptional what a great full emotion can be seen here very sad and emotional great poem yet long but all the feeling on ech letter flows like a stream great piece again............

Wow! this one is too touching....well done..keep holding on to the good things. "toze kwranasha la mn naya bas barasi jwana"well done.5/5