Comments : The Sound

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

    Woah Ashley! Nice! I love, thanks for commenting and voting(?)!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by snowboots firefighter

    Once again you have shown the poet within. keep it up and i look forward to you next masterpeice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    I can hear the music to this poem, nicely penned:

    I could reach places,
    Places that I have never been before.
    It was soothing my soul.
    Relaxing my heart beat.
    My mind was drifting away.
    Further...
    Further...
    Further...

    Outstanding.5/5.

    Ray Blue