WOW! Thats so good, I've been trying to write a poem like this for ages., but... oh welll..... my fav lines are
"Of headlines filling up in your minds
About War and President Bush
Or murders and deaths of humans"
very well writen, well done!

Wow this is really good. it has alot of meaning in it. i love it!

Wow. that was amazing. its true. and we people should be less selffish. i think thats a major downfall in america or even in the world. less pride. not everyone wants to hear about every stinkin thing u did rite. no ones perfect, put that aside and help those who are in need of love. prove to them you can hope. hopefully that didnt just sound like a bunch of rambled crap. anyway 5/5.

Very deep thoughts! You bring up spme very good points. Yes we as a society hav changed the world. excellent job on your write.

Its a very deep poem, with lots of potential, it could be a very big thing, you just have to get it right, work on it, make it known, this poem could get you famous, and i'm not kidding, you just have to get it to a 20/20!

Narc xxx