Brightness leads the way to known things whereas darkness shows the ways to unknown....Welcome back....Merry Christmas and Wish you a very Happy New Year...Take care and keep smiling always...

Nice poem, i liked how it flowed. Very original too, keep it up :)

Nicely done

Ooh you are a very good writer! i liked this a lot, you keep on writing dear! take care, xxoo

This is written with some real deep meanings...loved it

all the best and take care

I really loved this poem. The way you have described night time is really amazing. The word choices made your poem stand out. Excellent!

All i can say is one word...amazing...
this poem was a brilliant to read...it had me hooked ryt from the get go
i dnt kno wot else to say....gr8 write
keep it up
tk care
breex