I really like this poem however.. this one stanza doenst flow as well as the other "Let me know that I can trust you,
And weep my heart's tears,
With someone there to wipe them away,
Tending to a few simple needs:"

There will always be lies and truths, we just have to learn to seperate the good from the bad, nice job 5/5

Awee. love!!! this one's my favorite. it's just awesome.
GREAT job!!!
-Parker.

Wow good job. i can relate to this one.

Wonderful Job. I loved it. The flow was good as well as the structure. The imagery was good. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

I gope they were just rumors... anyways, great poem! most of it flow really well, i really could relate to it! another wonderful poem!

Forever*Yours