CURRY THIS IS MY FAVORITE POEM OF YOURS!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! O DID I SAY I LOVE IT!!!!!! LOL.

This one is very good. ^-^

5/5

very deep, good work

Wow this was excelent, realy emotional very good work =)

Wow.. very emotional.. great job!

Wow. very strong but i think the structure could be improved upon.

the ending..soo dramatic...

So much emotion!! Very sad story, but you wrote it beautifully. Great read! 5/5

marcella

WOW!! I loved it! I was captured by it, honestly. Keep up the good work!!!

Wow,,, sweetie this is amazing,, you have a true talent. there is so much emotion and passion put into this piece. it did not seem like any of the words were forced. i loved it allot

keep writing

Lovely Bones

Wow, it's sad and powerful poem, 5 from me. great writing, thanks for the comments to, :)

Really deep. i love it sweetie, keep it up.
5/5

Wow...scary but i like it...alot... ^_^

Wow this is such an emotional poem, you made it short but you left the right idea and imagry for people to stay hooked. 5/5

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