I don't want to comment on this cause I want you to enter it in my contest called "Abuse". Just think about it :)
~Midnight Sun

This is so sad because somewhere out there this has happened before, is happening now and will happen again. I wish people who did these evil things did not exist. Great job on the poem though, way to bring tears to the eyes.

...woah! that was AMAZING! i loved every word in this poem. the detailing was wow...the emotion..wow. the flow...flawless. 5/5

Wow this was so gd i was nearli crying if u have a friend this reali happened 2 im so sorry for her no1 shood go thru that and im happy for her if everyfin is ok now. this is a wonderful poem i loved it well done. mazie.X

I don't know what to say about this poem because it holds more meaning to me...
So i'll just say, you did an excellent job on the emotion involved..
*Gem*

Omg that is absolutly amazing
i don't think i have seen a poem as meaning as that
keep the work up since if people read your poems
maybe that will help change things in this wolrd

-chelseaa;;