Another well penned poem. The way you descibe things is wonderful. great job!

Wow!! you're really a talented poet... this poem is soo amazing.. i really like this part;

I can't take it anymore
All I can see is the sand
And in the sand
Your face, swirling by
Not really there
But I can see it

Woah!!

Nice poem i really like it

Lovely! I loved it!
xoxo

I could definitely relate to this!! and i love it!! it shows great emotion + a ton of talent! awesome poem!! keep it up =]]. _Mya_

Oh jeeze Danieru. One of your best ever!!! I love it so much!! *hugs you* So E-mail me already!!!

Mucho Love,
*~Always Here no matter what~A* (Aka...Kaito Kat!!)

Maybe in your next poem add a few more words to each line. this will help. just a few. but still don't get me wrong. this was excellent.

5/5 forever. David

Its awesome I love this you portray the character very well.

//Khrystyne\\