Very good poem! I like it alot, I like the words you put into it, it is so true and it sucks to live in this world sometimes but we get through it. Again great poem.

Aahhhh, that's the prettest poem u ever wrote. i lov it. it seems mor of life and caring than sad. AWESUME!!!!!

Now this a poem i like - a lot. This is exactly the way things should be. And i feel so much better knowing that there are people out there who appreciate that its the little things that count. (5/5)

Kelly
xx

A brilliant write

"But people always lie,
They cheat to get ahead,
It's how things always were,
And will be until the end."

It's so true yet so sad but i loved how you ended the poem. A simple smile can go such a long way..
Well done hun
5/5
*Gem*

This was amazing your flow and rythm, everything was great so thank you for a brilliant read
5/5

The flow and rhyming is unheard of. this is perfect.

i still give you the perfect 5. cause it is.

David