Wow. Very powerful poem. I liked the whole gist of it. It was sad but still great.
Keep it up

Yer i agree wit shan... it was rather long but yet u still managed to keep me intrigued thru out the whole thing... great job! 5/5

I really liked that. you have an intriguing style, and I also like the subject matter. I like how it ended with a bunch of maybes, reflecting the way that noone knows how their life is going to go XX

It's so sad......all the things that go through..very emotional...its a very kewl style! very nice!

This is very touching to me, I liked it a lot.