Wow.

Magnifico.

loooovee it.

I loved the way this was written. And I could feel the sadness that's in this poem..
Great job!

Aww such a sad poem.. beautifully written.. well done 5/5 xx

Ahh this is so sad and beautiful. good job! 5/5

Great work. i really liked this poem. it was well written and kept me glued all the way th rough.

OMGOSH!! i love lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelvoelovelovelovelove this poem.. liek wow!.. its amazing.. its perfect... my favorite! wow!

Comment #5:

This painted an amazing picture! I mean...your words flowed so well and it was just really well written. Keep it up and congrats again...it deserved to win! :)
~Midnight Sun

Helo agen.. this poems beautiful, it painted a very vivid picutre in my my mind, and it all flowed so smoothly. I love it.. thats all i can say :) 5/5

Excellent poem...really good..i loved it
great job!!!!!

This poem has alot of emotion inside it. I loved it. 5/5

And for my contest [[Titled Contest]] if you want you can read my poem thats called "He Took Me To The Cemetery" myabe you could get an idea to write your own. If you still can't come up with anything then you can just say you still dont want to do it.

This was so very sad, yet beautifully written.
A real joy to read.
I am definitely adding you to my favourites if you're not already in there.

This one is wonderfull.. I like the emotion that is hidden behind this poem and the way you express yourselfs with words.. continue this good work

This is so beautiful, it makes me so sad, i am adding you to my favorites
luv gabriella

I have alreday read it by a contest but i doesn't change its wonderfullness,really good work like everytime honey;)

I enjoyed this poem because I can relate to it! I thought this one was very good! 5/5

This is really good writing. i love it!