Comments : A Time Machine

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Short but really sweet, i loved it!!! not much more to say than that lol 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow, I loved this.
    Short but really sweet and filled with emotion, and I loved the imagery and wording.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    Short but cute =)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    Wowiez. super short but super awesome too. i like the fact that it's so short. adds to it's personality? i dunno. good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Excellent poem. very short but you very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    =] Amazing.
    Short, simple, & yet so very sweet. Wonderful job writing this one. You managed to get your point across without having to drag it out. Great job, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awww. This was short, but very sweet.
    REally shows love for someone.
    Well done. Thank you for the comment! It meant alot to me.
    ~Tay~ God Bless 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Short and sweet, i like!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short, but very very romantic. Great theme. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awwww. That is such a great little poem!
    Wow, you just got straight to the point with a maximum of less than 10 lines.
    Great job! Thank you for the comment.
    God Bless 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This poem is awesome! this has so much emotion in so little lines... great job!

    Forever*Yours