Comments : Knife In My Life

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Struggling with this addiction seems to be a fade these days, which saddens me, Kris I'm proud of you beyond belief, I know cutting seems like the only asnwer to lifes toughest problems sometimes. but your right in your last verse, hanging on to friends, is the wise choice..

    I dont mean to offend if i have,
    the poem is brilliant, might want to add some puctuation however.

    much love
    jenn

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNoTpErFEct

    I liked it:)

  • 17 years ago

    by arietty

    The poem is brilliant. Im glad that you got out of it. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    That was really good. You did a great job with the phrases you used to show how permanent the knife seemed but how you beat it...great job! :) Keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    So sad! Very good though! I loved it!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Thank you :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    I'm here anytime you need something dear, =]]

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. beautifully wrritten. writen with such passion. i enjoyed it.