Your poem was great. go on line check
out this . I WEAR A MASK. I WEAR A
THOUNSAND MASKS. MASKS THAT IAM AFRAIRD TO TAKE OFF AND NONE
THEM ARE ME.
THATS HOW ITS STARTS OUT
I am not sure what its call but i know from your poem you'll love it.

Also check out staind song outside
iam a old dude but when u write
you just write. it like music. music has no age. i wish i descover poetry
or whatever it is we do at your age
i probly would'nt be as f@#k in the
head as i am.Im not crazy about
love poem but i gave it a shot cause
i like your style. never stop writting.
write what goes on in your life. write as it happens. i carry pen and notebook with me . pepole think i talking to myself but im just trying out the next line to myself. keep it up.
i like what you write.

Well sometimes i do too