On My Final Day I Would

by *Ill Never Let Go*   Dec 30, 2006


On my final day i spend it with you,Walk below the stars feel the sand between our toes and hear the crashing waves that were ever so close

On my final day i would hold your hand and remember its touch for it i will not forget.

On my final day we would lay among the stars and tell our most preaches secrets that we had of on another.

On my final day i would make your dreams come true!

On my last breath i would say I LOVE YOU!

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  • 17 years ago

    by hippiehxc

    The caps part at the end isn't really needed. Neither are the exclaimation marks. But other then those things this is very well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Ditto on what I said about another poem of yours...Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper.