An absolutely amazing poem...poems written about love always come off the most strongly to me...there's so much emotion in this. I love it. I know exactly how you feel. I've been graced by this amazing girl entering my life.
it's hard to pick out one stanza from this poem to congratulate you on...mainly because the entire thing was filled with only great sections. this was an 'all killer, no filler' type of work :). very nice. great job
Beautiful!!! That took my breath away for a second! No lies! That's a sweet poem you have there! Terrific job! Well, I have no suggestions on how to improve it, cos it's fine the way it is =P
btw, thanks for your comment! =)
Karl, (may I call you carl, or 'Mr. Wild' lol) I want to thank you so much for writing this poem. You have no possible idea how much it really touched me. Really.. this is your best in my opinion. You describe the experience quite exquisitely. Thank you.