Good poem

'As we sit in the snow white sand,
And the waves crash upon the shore,
I stare to the sky trying to understand,
Why the stars seem brighter then ever before.'

'We laugh, we kiss, we talk,
Draw pictures in the sand.
Along the ocean we walk,
Just her and I, Hand in Hand.'

those are my favorite stanzas. I couldn't pick just one. they both have a lot of meaning in them. At least to me. Really the whole poem did but to me those were the best parts. This is an amazing poem! Great write. The imagery was amazing.
5/5
*Brittney

It is so sweet, I love it! Please, keep it up!

From MaryAnne Skora

I LOVE IT! You really can see whats happening and the love between whoever is meant about in this poem! Love your work, keep it up!

5/5

Awsome! keep writing!

5/5

Melissa.

This poem is beautiful. i loved it! good work!
5/5 =]

What a lovely piece of work, brim full of feeling and emotion!

Well done! Neil.

Wow i love this poem its so sweet

JEEZ!!this is an AMAZING poem.i fell in love with i.ure an extremely gifted poet.

Brilliant poem 5*

Thats sooooo good! i love the rhyme scheme and the soft easy rhyme it creates and the image you create with the beach and the rhyme scheme is steady as to make the sound of your feet sinking in the sand!

That is BEAUTIFUL! have u really felt that way before?

Am totally speechlesssss !! this is an outstanding poem realllly I LUV ITTTTTTT :D
keeeep the gooood work up ;)

This was simply adorable! being hand in hand is so romantic especially on the beach, that it makes me want the moment to last forever, and I haven't even experienced it yet. .I just mean for others too...seeing couples in love under stars, in each others arms is so priceless to me...as was this poem! I loved it!!

It is splendid! Love comes to us like an eggshell; fragile and easily broken.

It is splendid! Love comes to us like an eggshell; fragile and easily broken.