I love it 5/5

Wow thats a really strong poem i loved :)

Wow, great suspense. Your flow was pretty constant except a few stanzas. Good transitions in this story/poem. Keep it up

I like this one alot.its so sad!

Wow.
This was amazing. Kind of long but still great none the less because the poem keeps you captivated the entire time by the suspence of what could happen in the end. Wonderful write, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Beautiful ;)

thanks for your support and reading 'It Was Only a Dream'!!! I'm glad u liked it...

i hate guys that lie > < they're the worst kind (in my opinion). plz feel better, and thanks for making the world of luv a better place!!

~rain

Wonderful write. I liked it. The flow was great except for a few stanzas here and there. The structure was excellent. Great Job overall.

Peace, Joe

Wow, this is brilliant poem! how one girl seeks revenge! nice job!!!!!!!!!! i love it! oh and sorry that i only stat commenting now!

Wow, i really liked that, go her! lol, good revenge! good poem, good write, i liked it. 5/5

As I said in the contest forum, i still think this poem is Amazing! It has an excellent story line and kept me wanting to read more. This story is so true of many people. The ending was strong and it was a great poem throughout. Excellent write. =] 5/5 Definately.

Tammie

This poem is sooooooo good. i love it you are so talentd keep it up and thanx so much for the comment. shanik

Wow this poem had so much emotion it was wonderful ur a great writer keep it up 5/5