Cool poem. pretty thoughts.
and love isnt a game.

and the flow was ok, the rhyming didnt follow the pattern the beginning set, and the rhythm was off in a few places.

good poem though.

Honey you really do write very well. The emotions can be felt iin everyone I have read. Excellent job!

Very good i liked it alot

It was good, but the flow was a little off and it just didn't click... maybe go back and check the vocabulary a little more or something, it just didn't click for me... nice job still though, i liked the idea

Love is the only thing that can break a heart and make it better, and trust is everything in a relationship excellent write 5/5

Good luck with him. Great emotion and heart. Trust is key. Lovely piece.

This is a good poem, but the double spaces makes the poem seem too long and endless!

Narc xxx

This is a very good poem, it would help though if you capitalized the i's and the begiining of a sentence, but overall this is beautifully writen, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Oh My Gosh!!! that reminds me of my me and my bf!!! that's crazy! you're an awesome writer, this is amazing!! 5/5!!

*Shawte*