Comments : Do you feel the way i do

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    I really like the way you ended this with a unanswered question. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by NATiVEMAMA16

    I absolutely [LOVE] this poem... i feel this exact way right now with my best guy friend and this poem expresses exactly how i felt but couldn't get out... this poem is a 5 all the way =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I too have the same problem and it totally sucks. =[ Love how you ending the poem too. Wonderful job overall! Keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Beautiful and i no the feeling. you poems are strong and the emotion is nicely set. great word choice. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Besides some grammer mistakes this is a awsome poem, loved the flow, give it a 5/5!!!! keep making them this good!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Very good poem, i really enjoyed it, you're a good writer, lots of talent... the flow and wording was great, what a cute and heartfelt poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, i like this poem, but may i ask, why do you ALWAYS

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, i like this poem, but may i ask, why do you ALWAYS but double lines between your verses? just for once put them back2back, it makes it easier to read

  • 17 years ago

    by steve

    Very sweet, great flow and rhythem5/5 it rolls off the tongue

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    This is so sad...
    I love how you wrote it though

    GOOD JOB..

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    This is pretty good for not a recently submitted piece. Tons of people probably have this problem you have written about. Everything is good - overall, good job.
    ~ Lainey

  • 15 years ago

    by Galldora

    I really enjoyed this poem!
    very well written!
    I totally know the feel!
    Good Job!