I really like the rhyming in this. It worked really well. The imagery was good, too. Keep on writing. =]

Wow. powerful, it goes deep. like the feeling. its powerful. nice job. but i think you couldve broke it down a bit more. give it more lnes, some lines sounded better broken up.

Deserves a higher rating, this is a very good poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Very good write.

It was good and it flowed nice... the only part that threw me off was the last line, it was a little long, it didn't fit in the rest of the poem, and the poem was a bit repetitive... you've written better, but i still liked it, so nice job, keep it up, you have talent.

Great poem..pretty sad....keep it up.

I liked the rhymes in this poem, they were quite clever. Another sad write, looking forward to reading more sometime.

Good job, great emotions. You can improve by adding more imagery and descriptive words. Keep it up, thanks for reading my poem.

Wow, great use of words...
5/5

Awh this i sad but really good!

Great imagery and its sad too. I liked the rhyming except the last line - a little forced. But still good, the other lines make up for it. =)
she wouldnt let him mess with her heart
and do everything in his power to tear it apart.
Fave lines ^^
~ Lainey