Fantastic.
A wonderful poem about moving on with your life and trying to get rid of the past. You did a perfect job on this one. The flow was good and the meaning behind this one was amazing.
You did a beautiful job writing this one. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

This is a pretty long but very good poem ciao, love the flow, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

I LOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEE IT. i dont think i can fix that one bit. its was amazing. inspirational too. veryyyy niiiceee work. 100000000000000/5, i wish.

Wow, facinating poem. it made me think of my best friend all the way through... which isnt very hard but when i do it is because i am touched. great work

-/2 Terra

Omg i love this poem!!!!! it reminds me so much of my best friend...this is exactly how she feels about her ex boyfriend...excellent job!

Interesting and I'm glad it seems like she is better off without him. Being with someone is supposed to make you both feel better not stifled or upset in any way, so I'm glad that the person in your poem realised that, and I loved the way it was presented. Not to harsh or sutle. Very interesting, and the topic was something that I don't normally see to often. take care.

A very nice inspirational poem... It was written superbly and I really enjoyed reading this excellent poem... A poem I think a lot of people can or will relate to at some point in their life... Well done 5/5 xx

Woah. again, amazing. spectacular. wow. i hope someday i can look back onto my ex and i like this. you really showed this iff beautifully. the detailing, was amazing. you could really sense her pride in herself enough to let him go...wow. again, speechless. u did that to me w/ every poem, amazing. 5/5..again lol

I LOVE this!!
This is my favourite I have read of your' so far.
Jesus, this poem hit me hard, I think it's telling me what I need to do haha.
This was perfect...just perfect all the way through.

Nothing aches more then a heartbreak. You write them very well I hope you know. yes you do! Great write.