by *Charisma*
I really liked this poem! The ending was great, and I could visualize this girl with her head in her hands. It was just so good. I couldn't believe how much I liked it. The only part that lacked the flow of the rest of the poem was this line |
I really liked this poem but it feels like something is missing. Maybe you need one more line at the end to close it. i dunno...but it was really good! |