Comments : Someone To Be There

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I really liked this poem! The ending was great, and I could visualize this girl with her head in her hands. It was just so good. I couldn't believe how much I liked it. The only part that lacked the flow of the rest of the poem was this line
    Like someone hit rewind
    But that was the only part that through me. The rest was excellent!
    Charisma*

  • I really liked this poem but it feels like something is missing. Maybe you need one more line at the end to close it. i dunno...but it was really good!