This poem is so good i could relate to this poem so much. keep writing!

Oh tom...this is so heartbreaking...no no no its not close to the end, you can't leave...

Genau man. I think you captured the feelings that unreturned or newly deceased love often creates. The lack of hope and self-perceived bleakness of the world. And most importantly it's easy to relate to. Good job.

The ending was really showed much emotion. it was evident something happened to you. but the vivid description was perfect!

5/5 david

Aw. this was so good. the vocab was perfect. i wouldnt change a thing. well done.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

Wow..thats really good! i love it. ican feel the emotion in it. 5/5

xo kisses xo