Excellent Work. You asked questions. But you gave enough to interpret. Beautiful. Obsolutely Beautiful. That was such a beautiful title. PERFECT. the title was PERFECTION. I voted 5/5 Good job mate. keep writing.

Mann.. i enjoyed being the first to comment.

o wellllll

and again. beautiful. it give the reader something that pulled them in. passion. feeling was totally placed into that. error:
As the look deep into mine THEY, not THE.

5/5 memo

This is beautiful!

Hey. Welllllll. I'm bored; the stupid science thing is gunna be done at home. And you got a new nickname. ZzizzZzizz

I fear that I'm going to lose it,
People want to steal it all,

travis, my friend. you this poem was full of love. but these lines brought a tear from my eyes. because it happend to me and i was unable to hold her. people won and i lost.

and these lines
But I won't let them,
I'll be yours forever

gave me courage to try again to say her my feelings. you work is so gr8. i just want to say you that there is no words to praise this poem.... full of love... strong love shows.... gr8 work. take care. its the favourite poem whihc i have read today.. and it was such a gr8 experience. good bye

Sorry i forgot to say onething 5/5

I think that u write awesome poems! Much better than any of mine. i hope u write more!

Beautiful.... i loved it. i wish i could write like that!

Aww!!! that was really sweet!!!! good job!!! :-)

That poem was beautiful.
Good job your writing is sooo great.

That is breath taking..
I like it a lot. <3