Well done! I think its great...sorri 2 hear abt ur grandfather. keep writing!

Loved the poem,
was very very emotional and was truely written from the heart,this made the poem more powerful,
the poem flowed well & as im sure as it did me,leaves us thinking.
keep up the great work.

I think this is a wonderful poem! very well written...good job! 5/5

I liked this one. It was very well written as well as thought out. The emotion, depth, and heart were amazing. Nice work!

The poem is really good and its from the heart, I know exactly how you feel. Hope your family can move on and everything gets better excellent poem 5/5

Very deep and emotionally written, no doubt about that. I loved it, although this is a hard subject to write about you did an excellent Job. The flow as well as the strucutre were both great. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

This is a very good poem mousie, not a forced flow, perfectly written, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Its really good sorry to hear! the poem opens up peoples eyes there is a reason behind every single smile and every single frown. keep writing.

Bianca.

This is really good. Your words are true. Noone should judge another without being able to walk in their shoes. We can be empathetic towards people, sympathetic and think we know what they are going through, but you really don't unless you can personally experience it.

Excellent work on this. It's definitely true what we wrote. Although a lot of people see suicide as a selfish act, we at least need to consider the circumstances surrounding why they did what they did in the first place.

Good job on this.

Mmm that was good. i liked it. and im sorry to hear about the grandfather. i hope your family will soon cope. best of wishes.

Oh wow...this was so very sad....yet so wonderful to read.
Truly heartfelt and moving.

The concept of the poem is great, the way its written is excellent, and it is also very touching as it has truth in it. Keep it up..