Great poem 5/5. It looks like you got your message through..keep it up

You really do get your point across in this. Excellent job on the writing.

I think this is pretty good narc, deserves higher rating, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Wow! great poem!!!!! love it.

Mmm the emotion in the poem was nicely put. great poem keep it up.

Excellent poem, it's so true that we really shouldn't care what other people think/say we do the things we do because we love them and want to. nice job 5/5

Aww. A lovely poem, indeed. The emotion and heart were great. Good work.

Very interesting. The way I figure it, the reader can see it different ways. I see it as just an innocent nap, but a warm, needed one. And that the world may see it a different way, but you just want peace. Pretty cool. I liked it alot.

This is an okay poem.. not my favorite, the words arent very poetic and the flow isn't great.. i would say this is a work in progess.. except for the last stanza which i love! hehe :P

Very meaningful, I like it :)

---Ashley

I liked it. There was a lot of emotion put into it. Good job 5/5