Good poem, i enjoy reading dark poems =] This one didnt really have a flow to it though but I gave you a 5/5

It's really good;), it only scares me a lot :$

Hey big brother i love it please i can help you know where to find me....

Wow good job keep it up! : ) lol

ok i actually did read it...freakin sweet....i just like the shadows like...being freaking alive reminds me of the Zelda video games...lol

Woah! I love your poems.. It's like living in a nightmare...

the shadows are dark
almost black
and when they come to me
i pretend i don't see

These lines are amazing! :)

I feel like i am the one who is experiencin this stuff...keep up the good work

Wow, this poem is strong. There is a lot of emotion and it works really well. Keep up the amazing work... Smile :)
5/5

The shadows should say that you have to live not to die, GOSH.. well its a nice poem anyway.