Comments : A wish for pain

  • 16 years ago

    by aisyned

    Wow i hope u dont kill yourself becuz your talented i would like u to read my poem She gave up its under depression or the one NuMbEr Of CuTs

  • 16 years ago

    by grim

    Great poem. I went straight for this since it had death in it's title. keep the dark ones going.

  • 16 years ago

    by grim

    Wait I meant it had pain in it's title. Should've have been able to edit.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nix

    I agree with Dave but anyway you wrote this piece greatly. It is interesting and emotions are excellently described. I like the atmosphere, you also expressed pain superbly.
    Well done! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow....i like the poem! And hey, don't kill yourself!!!!!!