Steph,
It's beautiful! But I think you sould put scar tear cut lie instead of the plural ones. Example:

I am the scar upon my wrists
I am the tear running down my face
I am the cut upon my heart
I am the lie I hide behind
I am the smile I have to fake
I am the memories I wish weren’t mine
I am the pain I feel every day
I am the silent tear I cry at night
I am the lost happiness I once felt
I am the girl who’s breaking down
.............................................
And yet I am still beautiful
.............................................
See? Don't you think it flows better? Oh and just two spelling mistakes,

weren't* and who's*

But other than that Steph, I loved it!

Amazing Job Babe

5/5

Hey two things.
1. thanks for the comment on my poe, I am glad you liked it.
2. that was a beautiful poem. 5/5

What a sad yet beautiful poem. The end of the poem is such an inspiration. Your poems have touched my heart. I wish you all the best.

Omg i love it! i needed that this summer, and actually today too, it was a wonderful message, really! great job, great poem 5/5

You ever wonder why, sometimes, sadness makes someone even more beautiful? Maybe not so much as depression, but it makes you think "I wonder what he/she is like.." Thats what I got from this poem.

Great message! I loved how you wrote this poem.."I Am"..Hmm..It's just great!

"I am the memories I wish *wern't* (weren't) mine"
-just thought I should point that out.

Overall, well done!
5/5

And yet I am still beautiful
It's a surprising and beautiful ending, it's one of the best poems I've read

Very repetitive, but very good.
loved the strusture && the rhythm.
5/5 keep it up

Well done, i loved this poem because its deep and has a true message that i believe well.
you are so talented so keep writing these amazing poems,
take care Tara-Kay

Aww I really appreciated this poem and could relate to it immensely. Thank you for writing such a valid, strong poem and realizing that there are other people who can relate to and appreciate what you have to say. It really does help!

Amazing work! 5/5

~jas~