I really must admit this poem is original and passionately screams at me

I love this poem for being so true and origional. you have done the best job, keep it up, 5/5 from me

Hm. This is interesting.. I like it.
I really think the first part was the best. I'm sorry, It's late and I'm not sure what else to say.
A very nice write. Good job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

I truly hope that this is not what you're going through! bout a year i did something it wasnt all that bad, but no one can seem to get over it! so, honestly, this poem gave me chickenpox!

excellent work!

Narc xxx

Wow this poem is deep and filled with emotion, I really hope your not going through this. once again great flow and excellent job 5/5

Wow. a very deep and meaningfull poem that shows the truth of wat alot of ppl are going through but are scared to say something. 5/5 its great

Unique and original in concept, and a very powerful piece.
I thought the last two lines were particularly powerful.