This is a -beautiful- description of music and the flow of it. A wonderful tale of the song on flowing across a page...It's beautiful. I'm not sure what else to say, but this is one of the best poems of music I've read...it flows so naturally! And the wording is surperb; perfect, even.
Great job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

I love this poem, its excellent!

oh, and because you only missed the deadline by a few seconds i decided to comment anyway! thanx

Narc xxx

The subtle rhyme scheme enhances the gentle flow of this heartsong that mesmerizes my mind, and soothes my soul

This is a great poem. The flow is so nice and the words and rhyming make it just that much better. what an excellent poem about music and love excellent job 5/5

This is FANTASTIC! Well done! I luved it! 10/5!

Wow.
Amazing, this has got to be one of the best musis poems that I have ever read. You were right when you thought that I would like it, cause I love it! =] Whole poem was amazing hun, don't change a single thing! Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Awesome poem.
well done x rob

Omg wat a wonderful poem. u should keep writing ur a natural.

Hey, great poem, the rhyming is excelent! i really enjoyed reading it! well done!
Steph

What a beautifully written free verse. I like the repetition at the end. It gives emphasis. Nicely done! Another 5/5

This was beautiful.
I loved the imagery you used, and the wording was astounding.
I enjoyed the flow, I thought it worked really well.