Excellent Job! Love the descriptive words you chose. I am not good atthe diffrent kinds of poetry like this. I did enjoy reading it though. My sister and niece are good at this kind of thing. Graet job!

Wow! well done! I luved this poem! im so adding u 2 my favs! 5/5!

You've got great descriptive words. I had to read it a couple times to try and find the meaning of it, thats how deep it is. One thing though. For me, the line that says

"...golden porcelain smile is cracked and white.."

I don't know what that is or how that can be. But thats the only thing that got me. Great job. (once again..)

Beautiful poem. I love how you describe things, it really helps the poem "come alive", if you like.

Excellent, 5/5.

This poem is written greatly.great job like always. 5/5

I likte the wording to this poem.

Oh my goodness.. this is such an amazing poem!! i aboslutely love it!! great choice of words.. nice rhyme .. good flow.. all around just a spectacular poem.. keep it up!

Oh my goodness.. this is such an amazing poem!! i aboslutely love it!! great choice of words.. nice rhyme .. good flow.. all around just a spectacular poem.. keep it up!

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Wow! This poem is really good!

A ribbon of sound caress and by pass,
As glittering diamond thoughts are clear and bright.

Those two lines are really amazing! Great job and keep it up! And congrats on winning the contest...sorry it took so long to comment

This is great!!! excellent poem!!! and excellent writer!!!

GREAT JOB!!this is the best poem of yours so far.!!!! i have never read a poem in this form before but i deffinitally like it. im gunna try to write one like it well not like yours but in this form. great job

This was freaking brilliant!!!
I loved the last two lines, that was my favourite part, it really hit me.
The imagery was fantastic.