Wow, this is really strongly written and great!
5/5
xoxo

Oooo. wow. *oh! the imagery!* a very beautiful and creepy poem. mucho lovio.

xXx

Hehe. i read it again and was going to quote my favourite line, but ended up having an argument in my head about which line to choose cus i love it all!!! mwahaha. it's so good it gets a second comment (sorry if you thought it was going to be an important comment from a famous person).

madski