That was a great poem! I can't believe that creep would do something like that. First, he rapes her and then kills her! i hope he rots in jail. Again that was a good poem and don't forget to read some of mine. What newspaper article did you get that out of? I want to read it.

your wirteing are like WOW. They are much better than mine. Your way with words are unlike anyother.

Oh My God this was very depressing and terrifying, it's sad that there are people out there that does this kind of things..... It's even more terrifying when they do it to their OWN KIDS!!!!!! It really pisses me off, such wrong people in the wrong place seriously :( nice poem :)

this is really god but also really scary well dont i rele liked it take care xxx lilkit

Holy....shoot! Was the girl in the poem or was it me? Great perspective points! 5/5!