Debbie,
how beautiful your words.
you amaze me everytime you write
your words pour out like a birds morning song.
this is a wonderful write
Bravo! 5/5

This is really great, good job.
keep it up!

This is a very good poem debbie, 5/5!!! just a suggestion though add an (a) befor stormy in the last sentence, but still an excellent poem, 5/5 i got to say it runs in the family, all your family writes very good too.

Yet another fantastic poem by a Awesome poet. The flow and the strucutre were great. Keep on writting, you are truely a great poet.

Peace, Joe

WOW! WOW! WOW! I can't truly tell you how amazing this poem was! If I could rate higher than five I would. I love poems relating feelings to rain and thunder, but so often, it lacks power and emotion, but this didn't at all! This was truly truly amazing! It's beautiful!!! Thank you Thank you for sharing this. Beautiful

Beautiful words, flow and imagery. Well done! I could read this over and over.........

GREAT POEM. AWESOME WORDS MY FAVORITE OF YOUR YET!

Aww that's awesome!

I don't know how this got voted to a 4.3 beacause it is definetly a 5. When people down vote you, they should leave their critique...maybe they didn't understand it LOL!

I really liked this. good write! 5/5
lyl~Danni~

Really good work... 5/5

Really good work... 5/5

4.3!!! rubbish! ...tortured heart....
I would vote 10 if I could. Perhaps they can't read....you have to be kind to the blind.....

beautiful write...I just can't get over the family talent!! Love your style....
just look at the comments...
does that not say all. 10!!!!
Thanks!

The description was like no other that i have read. well done and keep reading. i will comment and vote.

5/5 David

WOW awesome poem, wonderfully written and word choice was great I loved it , great job my friend:::::
Left with gray to color all
Welcome teardrops when they fall
Shadows cast on brilliant hue
Resigned my lot, my bitter brew
you did a wonderful job , a pleasure reading it
your friend Tracy d. 5/5