Flamin excellent. laura xxx

Very good
very very good
i really like it

That was great
i loved it

V v gd love...
i liked it reminds me of what my bloke does!

That was so cute i really enjoyed it

I quite liked this, it had a good flow and wasn't over the top. the only part that confused me was the 'no longer a virgin but no longer me' because to me it sounds as if you are regretting the experience because you are no longer yourself, yet the rest of the piece doesn't sound like this. Maybe i'm just confused lol. nice work :)