The Trees (Extended Metaphor)

I liked this poem so much I had to come back and comment again. Bravo .I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite – most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future. If you like trees you can read a poem I wrote called – The memory of my shadow.

I love this one!! So much emotion and heart. Nice imagery and depth. The meaning was as clear as a spring day. Nice work. 4.6/5

Awww..well written! I love how it all came together! The second stanza was my favourite. Hmm..perhaps you should add more to this. But don't get me wrong, I love the way it is now, but just making a suggestion. Hehe!
5/5

Another great poem by a great poet, keep up the great work like always. you are great.

Beautifully penned. I like this a lot. 5/5