I love it!!

Thank you!

Ooh i like it! the first verse is kind of repetitive though...it has the words hide and pain too many times...try not to repeat a word in a verse...but overall its pretty good

Yea ok myabe i llike the words hide and pain andthats wat i wrote down,thanks for u comment

Well written.. i can relate! I liked this one too! Good job :0)!
*Just Lisa*