This poem is amazing, your a really good write. Keep it up!

Wonderful write! i loved it! sad and yet a situation that so many go through! 5/5!!!

ashley

Wow that was great 5/5 keep it up.

Another amazing poem. You have a really good way with choosing topics and situations that people can relate to. && I must say I read this poem and the whole world shut out...the phone was ringing and I had no clue. lol This line exspecialy stood out to me
The way your mind is set on repeat.
For all the bad to be replayed.
^^^Very clever and unique

The rapid pace makes it engergized a good read.

{5/5}

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