This is beautiful. I would make a couple tweaks to the following stanzas for the purpose of flow. Either way, it's still a beautiful poem. 5/5!

But I floated back to the top
And gasped a breath of air
It's then I knew I'd be okay
No matter what we share

I can be your dearest friend
If that is what you need
I can be your one and only
If that's where this will lead

Thanks for the criticism. Always respected. I know i'm not anywhere a great writer yet, but I am slowly working on it.

Good one by the way :D
Keep it up!

-Olivia.

I really loved this poem. The love you have for the one you write is a very deep one. I love the way you say you will be there no matter what. Excellent job!

Omygosh im not even kidding that gave me chill bumps! absolutely beautiful...i love it. great job!!!!!!!

Thats so sweet, especially the last stanza when you return the favour.
It's gorge!!
5/5
*Gem*

Great poem, i love it! its so sweet, ur an excellent writer! u rock;)
____XOX

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I really love how emotional this is for you. It seems so personal! And it really shows a self-sacrificing spirit. Great job and sorry it took so long to comment :)
~Midnight Sun

This is a cute poem i like it a lot .. keep writting

Awwwwww this is so sweet...wonderful poem!

Beautiful work as usual!!! keep it up :)

Erin

Awll this is soo cute i love it great job !

Beautiful poem. optimistic look to the position the person in the poem is in.

Very nice sentiments contained in this piece. Well written with excellent flow and rhyme. Good job as always!
Debbie

Aww. That is so sweet! 5/5

This is very sweet. I loved it all, especially the last stanza. Good job 5/5

This is a sweetp oem hun i really like the style of this work of yours its so rmoanic and i love the whole big metaphor at the start realy set the mood. :D
xxx alexxxx

Wow, LOVE this. Absolutely love this. So captivating, I lost my breath after reading the first two stanzas `cuz they were so well written lol.

"So I cried myself a river
Never thought I would
Sunk down to the bottom
Deeper than I should"

^^ How in the world do you do this? YOu are damaging my ego, Darling LOL.

5.5
:]

Very beutiful, tender and sincere

my favourite stanza:
You've been my secret love
My best friend through it all
So I should return the favor
And catch you if you fall.

good job!))))

Lizaveta