You always write such amazing yet simple poems that never bore me and always affect me. Quality stuff again. LOVE YOOOOOOOU

Short & straight to the point. It was every powerful. I felt each line. I know the feeling of being invisible. I love you so much, Babe. It was amazing.
-Heater

Oh, Lease! This was so beautiful. So sad and intense. I love this! But I love you more!! You're a talented writer!! Grr. Me want it! Please? ;P

Ily!

-` TUB

Dark but beautifully insightful poem. Strong imagery with powerful language, excellent work! One of my favorites of yours!

~jas~

Lisa, I love your poems. they are just so good!
The words leave me breathless, the flow is awesome, and the imagery is perfect.
keep up the good work.

This poem was really simple but amazing at the same time. Really dark amd beautiful the imagery was great and it flowed nicely. Well done on a beautifully dark piece of work.

Well done ~mel

This poem is absoulty brillant, I really love the word choice, it was amazing, the flow was perfect, the emtion was so powerful, and deep, and the vocab was the best, I think this poem is well written, and you did antoher excellent job 5/5