Comments : In a crowded room

  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    You have so many wonderful poems sarah, this one probably discribes about half the people on this site.
    Elise

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    ILOVETHISPOEM!!!! its amazing!!!!! i loved this title and i wasnt expecting the poem for it to turn out as good as it did but you proved me wrong. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I liked this one cos the rhymes were simple making it easy and enjoyable to read.
    Plus it's a ubject many can relate to.
    Well written
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I know I said the other one was easy to relate to, but this is even more so.

    The last stanza really improves the poem and ties together the other stanzas.

    Wonderfully written! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Ooh i like it...it was simply written which is good and it flowed well...and made sense all at the same time...great job

    5/5