Nicely penned. I loved it. It was short and to the point. Great Job! And keep up the awesome work.

Peace, Joe

Wonderfully written,i really felt like i was in the story and could relate.
--lexie

Way 2 Go. I Loved It... hehe ESP. the first stanza!! -Muah-

Way 2 Go. I Loved It... hehe ESP. the first stanza!! -Muah-

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

Love to the fullest degree. Run away with me and start anew...I love the theme. Beautifully written!

GREAT JOB!! I LOVE THIS ONE!!!! ESP...THE LAST STANZA! KEEP IT UP! POETRY LIKE YOURS INSPIRES ME! KEEP IT UP!