Comments : Hit the Groud Running

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    You have a unique style in your poetry and I like that. But sometimes your flow and even your rhyme scheme itself jumps and it ocnfuses the reader and gets us focused on the structure of the poem instead of it's message. So I would suggest working on that, but overall, I really do enjoy your poetry.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    I can relate to that in sooo many different ways ! its amazing !!! i think this poem is one of ur best ..

    5/5 !