Wow, thats really good.... it illustrates it so well!

keep it up!

This is a really good poem.
Great job.
-Jubilee

This is sooooo good!

This poem is so dark and true i loved the line

I cover these scars of what my past has done

if you've ever been there u can relate to that line. well done

Hey I like it its good I know how ya feel but then again I guess u hear that alot. SOoo pointless to tell you. I nvm Good to know keep writing your really good or have good taste!
~Bunnie~