That was a really good poem!! i love it. as a girl its just..gosh!!

Woow... this leaves me speechless... amazing write... i love this poem... its the best among the 5 poems that i have read... 5/5 keep it up!

Just let me hold your while your falling apart.

im not sure what went wrong there, but you made the same mistakes in all 4 stanzas!

its a nice poem, i liked it!
(oh, plz let me know what you decide to do with not sure yet)

Narc xxx